Thread:Capt. Jim Fisk/@comment-4810633-20120202181428

You may consider this updated paragraph for the last part of the page. I made some grammatical changes to help the flow of the sentences.

Though short this report may be, I hope it is infinitely informative and instrumental to any present and future undercover operations. I have found that there are many within the ranks of the Order whom have an unnaturally young look, contradictory to their age. Further observation reveals heavy usage of Bite- a substance consisting primarily of refined bituminous coal among other ingredients. It is effective in prolonging a users lifespan by retarding any signs of physical aging. A side effect of usage creates a tell tale sign of an Order member, the immediate area and those surrounding the eye sockets are slightly sunken and the skin darkened, the epidermis itself is unnaturally pale, lending to highly visible blue veins seen mostly around the temples, sometimes at the corners of the mouth, and the lips are discolored. Our recent ally, Emperor Stanislaus of the Red Fork Empire, stands as a visual confirmation to all of these findings. He has surpassed 200 years age, and was a former member of the Order.

I must end this transcript prematurely for there is someone at my door. I will further report my findings as they come. 